My Narritve

My Narrative

Hey bloggers!

Last term my class wrote some amazing narratives. My narrative was about two girls and a penguin. They lived in a beautiful snowy forest, their homes were on the edge of a snowy forest. My main characters are Mia, Bella, and Poppy. Mia loves to play sport and is very athletic. Bella loves coding and hacking, and is naturally good at it. Finally there is Poppy she is a small penguin who loves to play tricks on everyone she meets. I personally think my narrative is pretty good considering that I haven’t written one in a long time. I especially like how much detailed it has
The Snowy Forest!

By Neeve Goodhall

The frosty thin branches craned over the frozen lake as Mia  danced around her icy home. A large mansion on the edge of a snowy forest. She was playing hide and seek with her best friend Bella.”Found you.” Mia exclaimed. These two had been best friends ever since Mia had hidden from her parents !( Robert and  Clara. ) she hid in the tree, that hung over the place where Misty's family were having a picnic. “Okay my turn to be in.” Bella said in a huff , she thought her hiding spot was the best.

Mia had dirty blonde hair with baby blue eyes. She always wears a long navy blue dress that flowed out just a little and had speaks of white all through it. As I told you before Mia lives in a mansion on the edge off the snowy forest.

Bella had Dark brown hair with a short lilac party dress. Her hobby was hacking. Bella lived in a small cozy cottage next to Mia’s house. She always had a smirk on her face.

“Come on count to ten already!” Yelled Mia as she ran off into the frost covered woods. “Ok.” agreed Bella. “1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10!” “Coming ready or not.”  siad Bella slowly jogged off into the icy woods after Mia turning to anything that moved. Soon she could only see the tip off the mansion with its snowy white roof shining in the morning sun.

Suddenly a little penguin jumped out off a bush covered with icicles. “Oh my goodness Poppy you scared me.” Yelled Bella! You see the reason Bella and Mia moved into the middle of nowhere was because Mia and Bella found a crystal that lead them and their families to the forest. That crystal let them talk to animals. Poppy was the smallest penguin in the penguin gang, in other words the  tricksters that surrounded the gigantic icy forest. “It’s Mia!” Screamed Poppy in panic. “Flora the witch kiddnaped her!” “Hurry up then!” Screamed Misty.They sprinted to the far edge off the snowy forest, only to find that the cruel Flora was zooming away on her broom into the distance, Mia nowhere in sight.

Meanwhile Flora had taken Mia to her tall tower. Inside Flora the witch sashayed into the room in which Mia was prisoner in. “Since the snowy forest can’t survive without its Princess, I thought I should capture you that way you don’t have any fun and the snowy forest will melt!” She cackled. Mia just sat there in surprise, she could not believe that  she had fallen for flora’s trick. She new flora never liked the cold but she didn’t that she had a heart off well ICE! Flora had pitch black hair, a ripped dress and a gold encrusted broom.

“Oh come on.” shouted Poppy! She might of been small but she was very feisty. The towering drawbridge to the island on which Flora’s tower was on was raised up high in the air. “There’s no way to get across now.” Whispered Bella sadly, staring across the still, icy lake. “Wait.” yelled Poppy. “You could get us across Bella!” “Wait what!” “Yelled Bella in surprise. “You can hack the drawbridge and lower it down  over the lake!” So Bella cracked into action tapping away at her iphone like mad. Finally Bella had hacked right through the security and the drawbridge lowered.

“Who is making all that noise!” Screamed flora. “I’m sure it's just the wind.” Mia said suddenly. “Shut your mouth I didn’t bring you here to talk I brang you here to watch the melting off the snowy forest!” She cackled. (again) That was when Mia realized that without herself and the crystal in the snowy forest it would melt, all off the creatures would lose their home. “Why are you being so horrible to everyone?” Asked Mia rudely. “Why should I tell you.” Siad Flora in an expression that Mia had never seen her use. “Because I’m your friend so I can help...” “I want revenge!” screamed Flora interrupting Mia.

Flora used to be an employee working for Bella and Mia’s parents before Mia and Bella were born ( in the city.) She was secretly planning to steal the their parents business,but she was to late because they moved to the icy forest. So Flora followed Mia’s family all the way to the snowy forest, there she learnt to unlock her magic abilities. Flora wanted revenge so she decided to kidnap Mia, who unfortunately had the crystal at that time. If the crystal was put into the wrong hands could melt the snowy forest. So Mia wore the crystal around her neck, she took it everywhere.

“Come on you can do it!” exclaimed Poppy to Bella. “Easy for you to say!” “your getting a piggyback well I climb this flight of stairs.” Panted Bella. When they finally got to the top they found that the door was locked. ‘Oh no!”Whispered Bella. “What will we do?” Asked Bella “I know, we can try knock down the door!” whisper shouted Poppy. “ There’s a first time for everything right?” Said Bella. “ After all the tower is very old.” After a few tries it came down easy. “It worked!” Screamed Poppy in delight! They barged on inside and to Flora's surprise Mia was ready for it, she had heard Poppy and Bella while they were at the bottom off the tower! So she took Bella by the hand and off they went, down the stairs, through the Icy Forest back home safe at last. As for Flora, in all the rush she was knocked out the window never to be seen again!

The End!

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